Karen for Your Home said "yes I agree, with the clutter in resumes. I want to see if you have a reliable vehicle to get to work and should be listed. Don't waste my time calling in late because your commuting buddy has a flat. Most times if you hand it in and the person behind the desk doesn't like your appearance it goes into the shredder. Don't go to an office with the wife and 6 kids waiting in the car...shredder. It sends the message that you'll be missing work because of sick kids or the after school activities etc. I don't care if you love them or not. And this team player crap I hate ... shredder. I want you to do YOUR job, not the other guys. Don't drop off your resume in sleezy tops ladies and Lulu pants...shredder See this all to often .Even dropping of a simple resume you must look at semi descent. Unless your interviewing at the Keystone. LOL Guys at least comb the beard and hair. Clean parka without the dog stains on it and cat spray.
Leave your cell phone in the car for cripes sakes! Keep it simple, and if you have a chance to see the hiring manager always ask!If you can i:nclude driving abstract, etc do it . Go everyday and ask to see the manager or try to make an appointment. Shows your very serious about working. "
Judging by your post, good use of grammar, punctuation and sentence structure has nothing to do with a good resume!
Just make sure that people that apply for your jobs don't lawyer-up.
But, judging by your post, you don't really operate a business that requires any real skills or training.